WWW: - Simple layout that is easy to follow - Font and colour scheme is consistent - Caption in the image - Same font used from the poster for film title
EBI: - Margins are not clear - Ensure that you have the same size margins around the whole of the review as it looks very central, more so like a poster. Ensure that the centrefold line in the middle is clear - Page numbers are missing - The title of the magazine only needs to be written once at the top - this should be smaller also - The film title needs to be larger and should have a strapline underneath it - a brief phrase including your viewpoint of the film - The box with information about the film should be placed directly under the film title and strapline - Could the graph be placed at the bottom of one of the columns and could another picture be placed on the right side of the page? - Pictures should fit the majority of the page whilst still keeping the margins around the outside. Pictures should also be edited so that they are much clearer and sharper
WWW:
ReplyDelete- Simple layout that is easy to follow
- Font and colour scheme is consistent
- Caption in the image
- Same font used from the poster for film title
EBI:
- Margins are not clear - Ensure that you have the same size margins around the whole of the review as it looks very central, more so like a poster. Ensure that the centrefold line in the middle is clear
- Page numbers are missing
- The title of the magazine only needs to be written once at the top - this should be smaller also
- The film title needs to be larger and should have a strapline underneath it - a brief phrase including your viewpoint of the film
- The box with information about the film should be placed directly under the film title and strapline
- Could the graph be placed at the bottom of one of the columns and could another picture be placed on the right side of the page?
- Pictures should fit the majority of the page whilst still keeping the margins around the outside. Pictures should also be edited so that they are much clearer and sharper